Script Reviews & Awards
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Greenlight
"The screenplay's central love story ...is built with remarkable patience and structural sophistication. The silent, dialogue-free opening sequence spanning years of grief - from the funeral dress to the ziplock bag preserving her husband's scent to the gradual shedding of his clothes - is cinematic storytelling at its finest, communicating deep emotional truth without a single spoken word. The decision to withhold all sound until the mirror swipe ... is a bold, effective choice that forces the audience into Rachel's interior isolation..."
-Greenlight Review
Slated.com
"Disclosure from a Cloakroom" opens up with a brutally realistic depiction of overwhelming grief. With this, the drama of the material feels firmly rooted in reality. The examination of a middle-aged woman in the midst of exploring her identity in the aftermath of a marriage broken apart by tragic death also feels authentically and beautifully explored. There is a grounded quality to Rachel's story that makes it immersive and vivid. The final element of the bomb is a bit jarring, but the material has sewn the seeds well enough to close out with such a heightened, cinematic event."
"Ideal for prestige platforms or festivals. Modest production costs. A smart pick for actors seeking layered roles. Could appeal to audiences of "45 Years", "Carol", or "Portrait of a Woman In Flames". High awards potential if cast properly." (Scored 85/100 by top Online competitor to Slated.com)
" 'Disclosure from a Cloakroom' carves out a unique, modern and progressive identity through its ...approach to the rediscovery of love." - Slated.com
" 'Disclosure from a Cloakroom' is a richly drawn character drama exploring grief, identity, and emotional rebirth.... The screenplay offers a graceful blend of emotional realism and modern storytelling, making excellent use of a single setting and nuanced character work." - Slated.com